Shopping for Clothes

May 23, 2016 17:53
Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.

It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.

I think it's the first in 2 years.

I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.

Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.

My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
服の買い物

昨日は、研究を終えた後、アウトレットモールに行って服を買いました。

自分のために服を選び、そして買うのはとても久しぶりです。

約２年ぶりだと思います。

薄手のジャケットやシャツ、パンツなどを買いました。

最近ずっと同じ服ばかり着回していたので、良い気分転換になりそうです。

周りからは、「あの人いつも同じような服着てる」と思われていたかもしれません（笑）
No. 1　Amy's correction
  • Shopping for Clothes
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.
  • Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished work.
  • It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
  • It's been a while since I chose and bought an outfit for myself.
  • I think it's the first in 2 years.
  • I think that it's the first time in 2 years.
  • I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
  • I bought a thin jacket, some shirts and pants.
    　You cannot have two ands
  • Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
  • Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so these new clothes will be a refreshing change for me.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same clothes," haha.
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2　マーセル's correction
  • Shopping for Clothes
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Yesterday, I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes after I finished my work.
  • Yesterday after work I went to an outlet mall, and bought some clothes.
    　Bit more clear when you put all the time descriptors next to each other.
  • It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
  • It's been a while since I last bought myself clothes.
  • Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
  • Recently, I've been wearing very few clothes or a rotational basis, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you're always wearing the same clothes" haha.
    　Just an alternative, makes the sentence sound a bit more casual for some reason (maybe because present continuous isn't TECHNICALLY the best tense for this sentence).
Toru
Thank you very much always for correcting my post! :)
No. 3　Lirah's correction
  • It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth for myself.
  • It's been a while since I chose and bought a cloth clothes for myself.
  • I think it's the first in 2 years.
  • I think it's the first time in over 2 years.
  • I bought a thin jacket and, some shirts and pants.
  • I bought a thin jacket, and, some shirts, and some pants.
  • Recently, I've worn a few clothes in rotation, so such new clothes will be a good refreshing change for me.
  • Recently, I've worn a few the new clothes in rotation. so such new These clothes will be a good are such a refreshing change for me.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you always wear the same cloth," haha.
  • My colleagues might have thought something like "you start to think that I always wear the same cloth," clothes. haha.
Toru
Thank you so much for your corrections! :)
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